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SG Management offers two value investment objectives: the Value Equity Portfolio (includes both foreign and domestic equities) and the Water Sector Portfolio (Companies whose primary revenues and growth derive from some aspect of the global potable water industry: Water supply, pumps and pipes, machinery and equipment, filtration and purification, compliance and testing, utilities, metering and distribution, construction and engineering, and wastewater treatment and recycling.)

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SG Management offers two value investment objectives: the Value Equity Portfolio (includes both foreign and domestic equities) and the Water Sector Portfolio (Companies whose primary revenues and growth derive from some aspect of the global potable water industry: Water supply, pumps and pipes, machinery and equipment, filtration and purification, compliance and testing, utilities, metering and distribution, construction and engineering, and wastewater treatment and recycling.) [The language in the two sets of parenthesis should be individual sentences.]

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SG Management offers two value investment portfolios: the Value Equity Portfolio and the Water Sector Portfolio. The Value Equity Portfolio includes both foreign and domestic equities. The Water Sector Portfolio focuses on companies whose primary revenues and growth derive from some aspect of the global potable water industry, such as water supply, pumps and pipes, machinery and equipment, filtration and purification, compliance and testing, utilities, metering and distribution, construction and engineering, and wastewater treatment and recycling.