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BC provides portfolio management services, which may be described as giving continuous investment advice to a Client (or making investments for the client) based on the individual needs of the Client. Through this service, BC offers a highly customized and individualized investment program for Clients. A specific investment strategy and investment policy is crafted to focus on the specific Client’s goals and objectives.
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I have only have one comment: all three sentences say essentially the same thing.
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BC will review your specific financial needs and objectives, and use that information to develop a strategy that enables us to give you continuous and focused investment advice or make investments on your behalf.
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